What is the best approach to revising a rough draft

Answer:

the best approach to revising a rough draft is having someone else or yourself read out loud to see if it makes sense. Also check for grammar errors. Grammarly is a good tool for that    

Explanation:

I think you ____ do exercise regularly in order to keep your body in good shapeA. must B. should C. ought to D. Both B and C

Both seagulls and geese are large birds. They are also similar

The band that looks like milk in the night sky isn't actually milk, of course–it's a galaxy. A galaxy is a huge cluster of stars, dust, gas, and other objects bound together in space. Our Solar System, which includes the sun, Earth, and other planets, is part of the Milky Way galaxy. The Milky Way is about 14 billion years old. Almost 10 billion years older than our Solar System!

It took many years to discover the Milky Way. In the early 1500s, Nicolaus Copernicus was the first to show that Earth was an object orbiting the Sun. In the early 1600s, Galileo Galilei used a basic telescope to show that the Milky Way was made up of countless stars. Then, in the late 1700s, William Herschel tried to map out the shape of the Milky Way. He did not realize that large portions of the galaxy were hidden by gas and dust, so he could not identify the true shape. Edwin Hubble had access to many powerful telescopes and tools to observe more objects in space. His work provided evidence that the Milky Way was only one of many galaxies in the universe. He also identified the spiral shape of our galaxy.

Why was Herschel unable to correctly map out the shape of the Milky Way?

He couldn't calculate the actual age of the Milky Way galaxy.
He couldn't see through the Milky Way's gas and dust particles.
He didn't know that the Earth and sun are part of the galaxy.
He didn't know that the Milky Way was made up of many stars.

Rewrite this run-on sentence dividing it into separate sentences, correctly punctuated and capitalized.

My father is an important man and He wbrks all week so that I can eat, have clothes to wear, and have a
place to sleep and He repairs anything that breaks down around the house and He plays ball and builds
things with me and He is my friend.

25 April2015 is viewed as the deadlist day in the history of Mount Everest.​

rearaged this in to meaningfull sentence her exams she aced though even were lost her papers

What does the author enumerate and describe in "Respecting the Flag"?
A things to do and not do to the U.S flag
B occupations of people who work in public institutions
C the uniforms worn by officers of the U,S military's
D the wars in which American veterans have fought

Raising the retirement age to 70 would keep experienced Americans in
their jobs longer
it would take jobs away from younger
Americans.
A. Indeed,
B. However,
C. For instance,
D. Finally,

(onomatopoeia, alliteration, metaphor, simile, oxymoron, personification, hyperbole,
Euphemism, Irony, onomatopoeia)
1. I'll finish washing dishes faster than you can blink.

You and nine peers have been selected to apply for an important college scholarship. Only one student will be awarded the
scholarship. You have been asked to write a brief essay to the scholarship committee in which you share an important event in your life that significantly changed you, your view about life, your life goals, or your character for the better. Apply narrative techniques, a solid prewriting strategy, and creative sentence patterns to share your story and stand apart from other applicants.


HELP PLS I NEED A GOOD ESSAY OR I FAIL D:

What is theme of this song, Let It Go?

A. Do not worry about what others think of you.
B. Don't be greedy.
C. Be honest

what is a sentence
A.a group of words join together to make a complete sentence

B.words put in a straight line

C.is made up of six or more sentence ​

how and when does imagination overcome reason? in edgar allan poe’s ""the fall of the house of usher"" and julio cortazar ""house taken over""

Explain enumeration is an effective organization pattern for the bill of right

A good thesis statement covers
A. Four or more topics
B. Two topics
C. Three topics
D. One topic

I need help asap. With 3,4,5,6.

Summarize each selection in 2 to 3 sentences "The Bass, the River, and Sheila Mant" by W.D. Wetherell "Oranges" by Gary Soto from I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings by Maya Angelou “First Lesson” by Philip Booth "On Turning Ten" by Billy Collins "Hanging Fire" by Audre Lorde from My Forbidden Face by Latifa “The Scarlet Ibis” by James Hurst"My Brother's Keeper" by Jay Bennett
Choose two of the selections above and write about the rites of passage that individuals in the selections confront?

How was Phoebe's story like the plaster wall at Sal's old house in Walk Two Moons?

PART B: Which phrase from the text best supports the answer to Part A?
A. “Lions are the top tourist attraction to Kenya, especially in the Nairobi National
Park... Lions are also considered critically endangered in Kenya.” (Paragraph 3)
B. “One of the main causes of their demise, ‘is that people kill them in retaliation
for lions attacking their livestock,’ says Paula Kahumbu” (Paragraph 4)
C. “‘There have been a lot of efforts to try to protect the lions,’ Kahumbu says. ‘It’s a
crisis and everyone is looking for a solution.’” (Paragraph 10)
D. “One idea was land leases, another was lion-proof fences.” (Paragraph 10)
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The highlighted text above is an example of a(n)


a

verbal irony

b

alliteration

c

allusion

d

personification

e

appeal to pathos

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Which sentence from "The Necklace" best supports the inference in Part A?


"Everyone wants to go; it is very select, and they are not giving many invitations to clerks."


"'How silly you are!' her husband cried."


"'Ah, the good soup! I don’t know anything better than that.'"


"But one evening her husband came home with a triumphant air and holding a large envelope in his hand."

Why did the Wanpanoag welcome the pilgrims when they first came to America

The little girl was very sick she was taken to the emergency room at the hospital.
which is not a run on sentence
a.The little girl was very sick she was taken to the emergency room at the hospital.
b. The little girl was very sick; she, was taken to the emergency room at the hospital.
c. The little girl was very sick she was taken; to the emergency room at the hospital.
d. The little girl was very sick; she was taken to the emergency room at the hospital.

Hi can you please help me with this question:

What is understated or implied in Brandows argument and his full statement for the Academy Awards in 1973:
“What kind of moral schizophrenia is it that allows us to shout at the top of our national voice for all the world to hear that we live up to our commitment when every page of history and when all the thirsty starving humiliating days and nights of the last 100 years in the lives of the American Indian contradicts that voice?”

What is a theme of the poem "The Tropics in New York" by Claude McKay?

Everyone should have a place of dignity and belonging in society.

Peace found in nature can sustain us in cities.

No matter the distance, home is always close to one’s heart.

Nature soothes the heart and calms the mind.
Question 2
Which detail from the poem best develops the theme identified in Part A?

“And dewy dawns, and mystical skies / In benediction over nun-like hills.”

“And tangerines and mangoes and grape fruit, / Fit for the highest prize at parish fairs”

“A wave of longing through my body swept, / And, hungry for the old, familiar ways”

“Set in the window, bringing memories / of fruit-trees laden by low-singing rills”

2. He is a student ______Le Loi Street. A. at B. in C. on D. from

essay about responsible

Why does Mrs. Stevenson stay on the line instead of hanging up?

Answer choices for the above question

A. She thinks her husband will be a victim of the crime described in the men’s conversation.

B. She thinks burglars are robbing her husband’s office and is worried about his whereabouts.

C. She is worried at first about her husband and later about the murder being planned.

D. She knows she is the target of the murder.

Which dragon from how to train your dragon is known has the unholy offspring of lightning and death itself?



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